is it. The first chapter of the last book. Do you want to hear a
story? Besides this one, of course. Well, I shall tell you the brief
history of this fanfic. If you dont want to read it, skip it!
is the history of Fatal Attraction. I had written many, many fanfics
before I became a member on this site. Good thing, too, because my
first fanfics were terrible. Likewise, so were my first few for
Xiaolin Showdown. Then I wrote some based off of movies, just to help
me get the hang of the characters and as a desperate attempt to get a
plot I liked. I wrote Jurassic Park, the Temple of Doom, and Dead
Mans Chest (I may post these one day XD ). Aha, now I felt much
better. All the while I was writing fanfics and watching Xiaolin
Showdown (and eating and going to the restroom) I began to think up
interesting scenarios. I kept thinking about one where Clay fell in
love with Kimiko, but she refused him and he turned evil (let me
assure you, I dont hate Clay, although it may seem that way).
Also, whenever I heard the country song You
Shouldnt Kiss Me Like This by
Toby Keith I believe, I imagined Rai and Kim kissing on a veranda in
the rain while everyone saw (that goes along with the song). I
decided to write a fanfic based on my evil Clay plot. At first I
didnt want Rai and Kim to fall in love, I didnt want to go so
radically from the cartoon, but then I threw caution to the wind and
decided that if I was going this far with it, I might as well go all
the way! So I wrote the kissing scene.
read it to my sister when I was about n done (shes always the
first to read). She told me she loved it and to write another one. So
I expanded the plot to allow a second book. And after that I realized
I had enough material to make a third. So I did. Once done I was so
incredibly proud of my trilogy. Even now I consider it one of my best
works (maybe the best).
I became a member on this site, Fatal Attraction was the first fanfic
I posted. I didnt know how long it took to get reviews, so I
patiently waited. When I decided to post the first chapter of a few
of my other fanfics, I got reviews the first day. Disheartened, I let
Fatal Attraction sit, trying to decide what to do about it. I figured
maybe the whole Clay being the bad guy didnt go well with people
and it was just something me and my sister liked (we love to make fun
of Clay, just like Rai). Of course, Hepsis reviewed, but hes a
friend so he didnt really count (sorry Hepsis, I do love your
reviews!). And then, miraculously, MySpaceSavvy, MooseTracks2020, and
AandFObsessed all reviewed on the same day. It was incredible! So I
quickly typed up the first chapter of Hannibals Pawn, and sent a
few notices out. And here we are today. Thank you guys SO much for
all your support and kind words! Youre the bestest! ;)
I hope you had a happy vacation! Whered you go? Yeah, I was
beginning to wonder what happened to you, I hoped you werent hit
by a car ;) lol. Nice to see youre back and thanks for the review!
Rais awesome. RaixKimness will come up, but our monks are having
hard times right now. Thank you for reviewing!
nice to hear from you again! Thanks for reviewing!
I like to keep you on your toes. ;) And, one of your guesses is
right! Youll find out soon. Thanks for your review.
for the long delay, guys, Ive been really busy. Anyway . . .
Dont own Xiaolin Showdown or Fatal Attraction movie
T for intense violence
and Omi were about to head off to bed, still in the room where
Raimundo was. They were finishing off a snack.
probably be up tomorrow, Kimiko said. He bounces back.
rubbed his hurt knee. Yes, lets hope we do, too.
smiled. She had been holding an ice pack on her head to reduce the
swelling. Now the area was a little sore.
Fung rushed into the room. Is he up?
Kimiko said. Did Chase leave?
he done anything? Master Fung demanded.
monks stared at their master, then shook their heads. Dojo kept
Fung tapped Raimundos cheek. Raimundo, wake up. Raimundo!
moaned, eyes slightly opening.
Clay? Master Fung said.
is Clay? What did you do with him?
was starting to slightly move around, like he was uncomfortable. His
breathing was shorter.
. . . I dont know, Raimundo said.
Fung shook his shoulder. Answer me, Raimundo!
Fung- Kimiko began, walking forward. But he shot her a look that
stopped her immediately.
dont remember, Raimundo moaned. I just got rid of him.
dont know. I used the tornado to throw him as far as I could.
Master Fung, it hurts! He held his head.
does? Master Fung asked.
cried out, whipping back and forth on the bed.
no! Dojo screamed. Its like Mission
Hes got a bomb in his head!
and Kimiko gasped.
does not have a bomb in his head, Master Fung sighed. He turned
back, grabbing Raimundos elbows. Look at me.
screamed and wind started to whip around the room.
grabbed Dojo as they were forced back into the wall. However, Master
Fung didnt move.
at me, Raimundo, Master Fung said sternly.
met his eyes, clenching his teeth. Then he closed his eyes,
Fung grabbed the sides of his head and turned it to him. Look at
met his eyes again.
yanked to the side as a lamp crashed into the wall. Kimiko grabbed
the Nintendo DS before it went out the window.
Master Fung said. Focus. Calm the storm inside you.
. . .cant!
me help you.
from the noise of the wind, everything got quiet. The seconds dragged
by until the wind stopped. Rais eyes closed and he went limp.
Master Fung let go of him and sighed. He turned to the other two
monks. They saw he was panting and sweat was running down his face.
you okay? Omi asked.
Fung nodded. Im just not so young anymore.
happened? Kimiko asked. Is Rai okay?
Fung sighed. Hes asleep right now. Come, Ill tell you whats
sorry I leave you guys with so many cliffhangers. But, no matter
where I cut the chapter off itll be a cliffhanger. Please review!